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Citizen Erased. by ~ALostMind:iconALostMind:



Blank faces, and bar-coded heads,
We are all numbered from one to dead,
Living empty lives, we were born to die,
We were born to see, our children cry,

My name is 09654,
And I am hypnotized to the core,
I follow my orders, and obey commands,
And always living up to my demands,

But now I see, the real me,
My eyes are no longer blurry,
A person of freedom, and hope,
No longer do I have to cope,
With being, A Citizen Erased.
©2009 ~ALostMind
:iconalostmind:

Author's Comments

For one moment
I wish you'd hold your stage
With no feelings at all
Open minded
I'm sure I used to be so free

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:iconseptemberbreeze:
:clap: Bravo! This is great. :)
Continue writing.
:iconalostmind:
Why thank you September! Means the world to me, will do. ^^
:iconalostmind:
HEY!!! where have you been? how are you? hows your summer?! thanks ;p
:iconb00kah0lic:
Sorry I've been gone so long! D: I had a huge birthday weekend and my house got mobbed by family for a long time, then I went to the beach. But I'm back now!
I'm wonderful! ^^ How've you been?
It's going great! I got in the water at the beach. :dance: Very unexpected. I don't like the ocean usually. XD How about yours? =)
:iconalostmind:
SORRY! I have been so busy!. wow that sounded fun! Beaches are awesome! WELCOME BACK! Im quiet wonderful myself^^.

Yeah im not really fond of the ocean myself,
I Have had a blast at friends houses, and such, its so good to be of school!
:iconb00kah0lic:
Haha. :XD: No prob, same here.
Thanks!
I'm glad to hear that. ^^

Hah! Finally someone who I have that in common with! Most people just love the ocean.
I bet summer's a really great break. Glad you're enjoying it. ^^

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